"Good Morning Good Morning"

Last year, I wrote a post about a section of the saxophone part in "Good Morning Good Morning" and how it seems to have been inspired by 1950s rock and roll songs.  Even at the time, I was a bit unsure of the accuracy of the rhythms in my notation.  Yester-day, I was thinking about this part again, and I realized that it's a dotted rhythm.  Where I had:

it's actually more like:

What I have still might not be exactly right, but it's certainly a lot closer.